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Drew Mcintyre (Complete set)
« on: August 17, 2010, 02:55:22 PM »










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Re: Drew Mcintyre (Complete set)
« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2010, 10:11:26 AM »
comment plis :D

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Re: Drew Mcintyre (Complete set)
« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2010, 04:58:12 PM »
This seems to be a very well thought out set of cards.  Very nicely done. 
Below, I have listed some comments and typos.

Superstar Card:
The ability seems strong (an extra card in hand and some Arsenal manipulation to boot), but balanced.
There’s a typo on “shuffle” and the last part of the ability sounds like your opponent can ignore parts of the cards he wasn’t allowed to play in the first place.

You’re the Chosen One:
It should be “do” instead of “does” in the text.

Broken Dreams:
Great ability.   Although, it should probably be limited to once a turn.  The way it's written now, you could look at the top two cards as many times as you wanted.

My Own Road to Victory:
“As Action” and “As Reversal” should probably be “As an Action” and “As a Reversal.”  “Put into” should be “Put it into.”

Future Shock DDT and Drew’s Boot:
You’re missing an “s” in successfully in a few spots.

I’m the Chosen One!:
“with Momentum” might be better as “has Momentum”
Arsenal should be capitalized
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Re: Drew Mcintyre (Complete set)
« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2010, 05:21:46 PM »
I believe the intent on the last bit of Drew's Ability is to let him drop Vince McMahon Interferes even if he doesn't have a 3 or greater SSV and to drop Backed by Mr. McMahon even if he's not highest SSV.

I could have sworn that the line in the song was just "What is yours...shall be miiiiiiine," but I could be wrong.
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Re: Drew Mcintyre (Complete set)
« Reply #4 on: August 19, 2010, 05:46:26 PM »
I think its What is yours......will soon be miiiiiiiiiiine

ok we all wrong

"What's that metronome I hear, perhaps the end is drawing near You never hear the shot that takes you down Now your dreams a memory, and seems more true from far away Just like smoke that fades and makes no sound . Out of time, so say goodbye What is yours, now it's mine And I dream broken dreams, I make them come true I make them for you . Bad Dreams come true, I make them for you (x4) . Out of time, so say goodbye What is yours, now it's mine And I dream broken dreams, I make them come true I make them for you "
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