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Offline NJDevil18

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A Foundation of Old School Wrestling
« on: August 12, 2020, 01:14:34 PM »
I do not know if you want to fix this in revisions and I do not know if I am even posting this in the right spot, but I noticed that there is a slight grammatical error on the card.  Towards the end, it says "where # is the double" and I think it should just say "where # is double".  Thanks.

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Re: A Foundation of Old School Wrestling
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2020, 03:31:08 PM »
I also think the ace label should be before once during each of your turns because the first part does not seem like an ace.

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Re: A Foundation of Old School Wrestling
« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2020, 05:24:00 PM »
Thanks, though we found an ACE identifier in the middle of sentence looked ugly as sin, so we stopped doing that, heh.

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Re: A Foundation of Old School Wrestling
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2020, 06:45:16 PM »
It definitely confused me at first, but I see now why you did not split it up.  Because the ace part references the number in the sentence before...